Excellent Animation! A few critiques though:
- A play button at the front would be nicer than just starting
- The ending is abrupt and we're left with a black screen; it could end better
- The background moves past faster than the figure appears to be running. You cold fix this by incorporating a midground AND a background. The midground moving faster than your background, of course.
Good job. Your animation skills are elite.
It looks like you've been practicing with walk cycles. They were the strongest thing this animation had going for it.
Overall, you made a pretty literal translation of a song and used a style that I don't think fits. Don't be discouraged though, your animation was better than a lot of the crap on here. Try putting more detail in next time. Several objects were static and moved together... which is fine, but if things aren't going to move, they can stand to be more detailed. You're heading in the right direction -- keep with it!
Thanks fo constructive critism, I'll look into this when I'm working on my next animation :)
The end said, "To be continued"
My advice: DON'T EVER CONTINUE THIS EVER.
There was no sense to it and it didn't even pull me in because of that. I didn't like the animation. HOWEVER, you did some interesting camera movements and made some good character animation with the cop figure. So you're not a loser or anything.
Genious, a bit short, but genious
Okay, Henrieta the cat was probably the least qualified for the job of telling the Predator storyline, BUT that's what made it so incredibly awesome. I enjoyed it being short, but I think you could've given us juuussst a little more. For example, actually showing the Predator. Meow, meow.
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